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Post by Cammie on Aug 23, 2005 14:39:36 GMT -5
To one of my dearest friends ever, my soul sister, my angel, my Amazing Grace.
We were friends for many years Friends through laughter, friends through tears Friends through all that came and went Until that sacred bond was bent
Our paths went their separate ways Forgetting all of our shared days But when I stumbled on my path You forgot the years of silent wrath
You helped me up when I was down You let me wear your sparkly crown Once again the best of friends Once again we made amends
We live apart, together at the same time A friendship strong and so sublime No one can ruin it, no one can try With you by my side, nothing goes awry
Years went by Then you closed your eye Now I look upon your face And remember you, my Amazing Grace
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Post by Lily on Aug 26, 2005 0:58:28 GMT -5
*hugs tight and cries* This one has to be my favourite out of all the poems you've written. Not just because of whom it's about. Because it flows and the wording just goes together. It's got a lot of meaning in it. Lovely, just lovely.
Amazing Grace, How sweet the sound, That saved a wretch, Like me.
I once was lost But now, am found. Was blind But now, I see.
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Post by Lily on Aug 28, 2005 23:44:10 GMT -5
I read this one again because my mum wanted to see it and I've realised that every bloody time I read this I cry!! You did it on purpose!! lol
Mum says:
My favourite part is the "You let my wear your sparkly crown" part!! You're very talented! Keep it up, Cammie!!
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Post by Cammie on Aug 29, 2005 0:30:45 GMT -5
*grin* Thanks, Linda!!
BTW, Lily, remember when we were at the mall, we went into Claire's... and Amber/Ashley (so sue me, I don't remember) tried to make me wear one of those plastic sparkly crowns... I didn't know whether to laugh or cry... lol
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Post by Lily on Aug 29, 2005 0:34:19 GMT -5
*hugs tight*
And the fact that I had a sparkly crown in my room? *sweet smile*
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Post by Chael on Aug 29, 2005 1:49:50 GMT -5
Whoa, that was deep. It's kinda hard to believe that I know someone who knows someone who wrote something that amazing. Of course, I'm only scratching the surface because I wasn't there, but this is REALLY good! Like everyone else, I think I'm gonna cry, too! ~Chael
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Post by Lily on Aug 29, 2005 9:59:33 GMT -5
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Post by Peanut on Aug 29, 2005 10:48:48 GMT -5
I´m crying... I love her stuff to bits. that was so deep. and good! I would love to have a friend here like that.
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Post by Lily on Aug 29, 2005 17:12:15 GMT -5
*teary eyed* Not going to cry, not going to cry, not going to *cries*
Lise, you've got us!! I know that may sound stupid coming from someone you barely know, but we're here for you!! *hugs*
"It takes a while to find it Some they never will Colour printer took time And it held it still
Yeah, this is what I want This is what I need This is exactly what I've been waiting for" -Autopilot Off "This Is What I Want"
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Post by Cammie on Aug 30, 2005 0:18:15 GMT -5
... you're all crying? *worried* please don't... thanks for all the nice words though....
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Post by Lily on Aug 30, 2005 0:40:19 GMT -5
Just because it expresses a lot of emotion, Cams, no worries *hugs*
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Post by Laura on Aug 30, 2005 9:56:21 GMT -5
Dearest Cammie,
That was a wonderful poem. You even made me get teary eyed and I don't normally cry at poetry! It was very deep and I can understand why it's Lily's favorite out of the ones you've written. I can't wait for more from you, sweet girl!!
Love, Laura
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Post by Lily on Aug 30, 2005 10:06:28 GMT -5
OMGWTFPLOARBEARAPRILDUCKLYPLEASANTONDENMARKLAURA!! *Glomp!!* WeLcOmE!!! Now go join!! ^.^
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Post by Peanut on Aug 30, 2005 10:48:26 GMT -5
*hugs back* thank you Lily! that means a lot to me.
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Post by Lily on Aug 30, 2005 16:56:38 GMT -5
No problem Lise! From one friend to another ^.^
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